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What goes through your mind?Flame haired beauty As you watch a ship in trouble As you watch the turbulent tide Are you hoping that it sinks and that all on board die?will you smile when it finally...
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Hi DL! An interesting angle here! If it is ok to say, though, the piece is not a sonnet, was this an oversight?
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It has nice imagery and rhythm, but it is true... it's not a sonnet-- yet. But it could be easily shaped into a sonnet with more revision.
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Fresh perspective. I liked it.Peace,<br>Gary<br><br><br><!--EZCODE LINK START---<a href="http://p104.ezboard.com/bmanaginglife">Please Visit My New Board: Managing...
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Thanks everyone im glad you liked it, It's my first attempt at using a fixed form of any sort! I read up on the basics of a sonnet and it said something like it had to be 14 lines long and have a...
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Wish I could be more help - never could get the hang of a sonnet... Here's one of Willie S's When my love swears that she is made of truth a I do believe her, though I know she lies, b That she might...
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Thankyou you very much for your help!!! i think i have got it! Ill see what i can come up with !!All the best Jay DLVisit me at
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Hi, Jay! There are various sonnet forms to choose from, but the common or more usual one is a Shakespearian Sonnet. The form consists of three quatrains and a couplet. The usual rhyme scheme is...
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Thankyou! I will check that out !! I never realised that poetry could be so intricate! Thanks for your help!All the best Jay DL
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DL --Here's a good reference on SONNETs. All you need, at least for a while:www.thepoetsgarret.com/sonnet1.htmlGaer
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